Drakomis Reign wrote:
That's a lot of O's, lol.
Fluttereye wrote:Yeah I had to short it down by about 90%, because I kept getting "503 Internal Server Error"
Too many O's. It's still quite a bunch, and about 94% of the O's aren't shown.
I have no idae where those O's came from o.O
dapples wrote:Part of the problem is the great discrepancy in our culture between sex and violence...
Fluttereye wrote:As I have been to this site quite a few times, mainly in the forums, and also been here as a writer, I have noticed something that could be disturbing.
Every single fanfic here, except mine, that is rated NC-17 is a clopfic. Just clopfics, not an adventure story with shipping, but just a clopfic. I don't get it.
Fluttereye wrote:Dude sex is totally overrated, EVERYONE knows that dismemberment, violence, torture and murder is the way to go! *Sarcasm*
I have nothing against clopfics or grimdark. As long as the story is good, and well written. I remember reading one, I can link it here!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7125827/1/S ... e_Massacre
Like this, I mean wtf?! This is taking it too far on the sexual and grimdark level. However, if this had had an amazing background story to it, with more detail and "realism" it could actually work out to be a good fanfic. So, for me at least, it's not so much the genre, but it's more the quality, content and story.
Also, I hope you guys understand what I mean about the kitchen thing right? Otherwise, you will never be able to make Pizza. Or dogs.
Fluttereye wrote:Haha! It did make me laugh though Then again I am a sick person, even though only I know it.
Well the story does have a good grammar and build up (if I remember correctly) but it was too direct and bland. You didn't really feel anything for anyone there. I suppose most feel disgust but I felt nothing. If you had made the story bigger, with more detail, more feelings, and most importantly a backstory it actually could have been great. But, for no reason everyone in the story (apart from AJ) are very OOC for me.
It's not hard at all to make something moe violent and sickening than Cupcakes, but it requires quite a feat to make it give a bigger feeling than Cupcakes. In Cupcakes, Pinkie Pie was so in character it was a blast to read, and slightly sickening.
I don't understand how so many people have had their "relationship" with Pinkie Pie be "ruined" because of the story. It only made me like her more, and everytime anyone in the show mentions cupcakes, I laugh
Fluttereye wrote:Like FillyInTheBlanks (God your avatar is so fucking CUTE!) I don't mind reading clopfics, they usually make me laugh actually... I do however, enjoy reading the violent ones.
Davidism wrote:How can I write a Clopfic that Filly will read?
I can do this~I know I can.
FillyInTheBlanks43 wrote:There are only so many ways to write about sex
FillyInTheBlanks43 wrote:and that fact coupled with the fact that MLP sex makes me ridiculously uncomfortable
Davidism wrote:It was a steamy night in Ponyville, and Twilight just finished ______ for the eighth time, and her breath was ragged and harsh. Her ______ was ______ as was her small ______, but that didn't stop her from wanting more.
Hmm... it will take some doing, but if I carefully placed blanks in the manuscript, it would harmless right?
Davidism wrote:What if they were ponies, disguised as Woodland creatures? Would Filly be creeped out if say, three or four Teddy Bears were doing the "Freak Nasty"?
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